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Haikus #2: Love (Discussion)

lucyinthesky said – Tue, 02 Dec 2008 04:02:57 -0000 ( Edit Link )

A haiku is made up of 3 lines. 1st line: 5 syllables. 2nd line: 7 syllables. 3rd line: 5 syllables.

This discussion’s theme is “love”.

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MayMay said – Tue, 02 Dec 2008 14:08:42 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

I loved you once.
“When the love is gone, move on.”
Others, there will be.

Quote – Rapper, 50 Cent
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lucyinthesky said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 17:38:16 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Unconditional
Strong sentiments disappoint.
Keep one eye open.
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Shouldice said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 17:53:24 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

I will be married to one whose heart I hold dear do not squeeze too tight
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1. lucyinthesky said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 18:56:43 -0000 ( Flag Edit Link )
  
  How lovely!
  
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Shouldice said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 20:47:37 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Thanks sadly it didn’t split the lines up well l will be married to one whose heart I hold dear do not squeeze too tight
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Shouldice said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 20:48:11 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

nope that didn’t work either. I wonder how to put line breaks in
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lucyinthesky said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 20:51:16 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Just put <br> to put a line break in. :)
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windwind said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 21:52:14 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

I love my sofa

To rest, to read, to watch films

My Island of peace
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windwind said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 21:55:29 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

I love you Daddy

Why are you going away?

Will you remember?
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1. lucyinthesky said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 23:05:08 -0000 ( Flag Edit Link )
  
  Great haikus, Windwind! I really enjoy them. :)
  
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windwind said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 22:06:14 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Once I loved a doll.

No hair, one eye, one leg – gone.

Gone. My childhood. Friend.
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windwind said – Wed, 03 Dec 2008 22:15:19 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

What is love you ask

I will tell you but not now

Now I cook for you
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MayMay said – Thu, 04 Dec 2008 03:30:22 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Why is it so hard?
They say the best things are free.
I shouldn’t have tried.
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MayMay said – Thu, 04 Dec 2008 03:37:13 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Shoes make me feel good.
With me each step of the way.
Secret love, footwear.
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MayMay said – Thu, 04 Dec 2008 03:40:32 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

You are my hero.
Seeing me through all the wrong.
I love my brother.
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oLahav said – Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:31:35 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Love’s complicated.
Well, at least I think it is,
But what do I know?
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lucyinthesky said – Thu, 04 Dec 2008 21:42:16 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

@ MayMay – I really love your haikus. They are very sincere and sweet.
@ oLahav – if you say it is, then it must be so!
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lucyinthesky said – Fri, 05 Dec 2008 02:04:02 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Turn back time sadly
to a date where I believed
love could melt muscles
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avicster said – Wed, 10 Dec 2008 13:46:07 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Is love oversold?
At least that is what I heard
A four-letter word
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lucyinthesky said – Thu, 11 Dec 2008 07:29:36 -0000 ( Flag Edit Mark / Unmark Best Link )

Paid vacations, sure.
Fake hugs, words and promises;
But that isn’t love.
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