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Challenge: The 16 word story

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lechuck
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lechuck said:

Here is the challenge:

Try telling a story in no less and no more than 16 words. The story subject is the writer preference. The objective is to tell an engaging story that is more than just a statement. It should have a character, though a name is not required.

This is a tough challenge that allows your creative skills to really meet their pressure point but often can result in some amazing results.

Ready, set, write!

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  • Posted 4 months ago.
oLahav
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oLahav said:

“A child was born. The townspeople were elated. The witch was not. The child was killed.”

Hey, the beginning almost sounds like sleeping beauty.

I hope I didn’t break any of rules… although rules were meant to be broken.

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chermann
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chermann said:

I traveled, lost myself, loved it. I met you, settled down, loved that more.

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  • Posted 4 months ago.
Andrew Brown
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Andrew Brown said:

I could tell you many things about myself, but I’m limited to only using sixteen words.

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  • Posted 4 months ago.
csrd
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csrd said:

Here is a sixteen word story..

I, a contrivance of Mother Nature, am to write her biography; as I age I manage…

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  • Posted 4 months ago.
oLahav
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oLahav said:

Another 16 words story: There once was a mighty king who was loved and respected by all…. Then he died.

This one is actually a famous story… I think it’s part of a Middle-Eastern folk tale or something of that sort. A guy (let’s call him Joe because I don’t remember his real name, and it was probably terribly long and impossible to write correctly in English anyway) was invited to dinner. Now the other guests wanted to trick Joe, so they asked him to tell them an interesting story, as they figured he’d be stuck telling the story while they eat all of the food and then he’ll be left hungry. So Joe started: “There once was a mighty king who was loved and respected by all”. At that point the food came in and Joe stopped talking and started filling his plate. The other guests asked Joe, “What happened then?”, thinking he will now continue the story and will be unable to eat. “Then he died”, finished Joe, and ate twice as much food as anyone else.

Come to think of it, it’s not such a great story, is it?

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atikna
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atikna said:

there was a king and a queen. Both died and its the end of my story!!!

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saratheman
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saratheman said:

gramma and mother fought endlessly made the boy a rebel n finally a serial “mother’s” killer

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purushp
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purushp said:

“Wow, what a life!”, said the diamond in the crown on looking at the iron sword.

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yuva
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yuva said:

she waits for her lover with 3 expectations from him trust, loyalty and never changing love

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oLahav
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oLahav said:

I once wrote a story using sixteen words and only sixteen words. And here it is.

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lucyinthesky
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lucyinthesky said:

She said she would rather die alone than try to love again. She died eternally invulnerable.

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  • Posted about 1 month ago.
chandra_avinash
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chandra_avinash said:

Knock Knock!

Whosedere?

Einstein’s Train.

Einstein’s Train Who?

[Wham]

Knock Knock!

Whosdere?

Bus?

Bus Who?

Killer SerialBus

[scream]


note: angular brackets – [ and ], enclose the sound effects :)
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purushp
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purushp said:

“I am in love” shouted a tiny fish, “me too”, a whale gulped with hunger satisfied.

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  • Posted 12 days ago.
geekgirl
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geekgirl said:

There was a mighty fight.The good won ,vanquished the evil and lived happily ever after.

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rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

I’ve seen her again. This time she breezed past me, taking my breath away . I’m dying…

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rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

O lady of my dreams and my waking hours, let me live or let me die.

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rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

“Hey , what’s the time?”

“Welcome!”

“Do I know you?”

” Two hours past your death. Yes”

“Amen”

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rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

“He loves me, loves me not…..”

“Girl, I love you! Do you love me?”

“Wonderful! No.”

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  • Posted 9 days ago.
rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

Once upon a time there lived a handsome English man who wrote what you just read.

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rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

Once upon a time there lived a beautiful young lady who read what you just read.

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  • Posted 8 days ago.
rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

I waited for you all these years. I always knew you’d never come by. Love, me.

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rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

Bride : “I don’t.”

Priest : “Do you need a moment to rethink?”

Bridegroom : “Plus she needs brain.”

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  • Posted 8 days ago.
rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

She is here, there and everywhere. I’m lost in her and I can’t find her anywhere.

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  • Posted 8 days ago.
chandra_avinash
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chandra_avinash said:

I wrote a sixteen word story and published it on toilet paper. Now I am rich :D

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  • Posted 7 days ago.
rashmitharao
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rashmitharao said:

I loved. It hurt. I learnt. It healed. I forgot. I loved again.

So I died.

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  • Posted 7 days ago.
chandra_avinash
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chandra_avinash said:

I came to conquer, but then I saw things and then I just stuck around lazily :)

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